Thank you everyone for the rave reviews
on part one of three! I really didn't expect such crazed feedback, so
without further delay here is part two of three of my real-life
apocalyptic writing prompt response:
We arrived at the lone Shell gas
station in our little town we called home off the interstate. I
personally would've expected many people looting the fuel at the gas
station but, as quiet as our little town was I'm sure many knew what
were going on or were at work in a nearby larger town. Obviously the
workers there had closed up shop, no employee cars were seen, the
lights inside were off and there were temporary chain and pole gates
across both drives.
I eased to a stop behind Brandon as he
pulled up to the chain. I watched him intently as he grabbed
something out of the back of his truck. I couldn't see what he was
doing from my angle, but I knew instantly when I saw the big chain go
limp. He tossed the bolt cutters back into his truck and pulled
forward until he was rounded to the next driveway. Brandon signaled
me to pull up to a pump, where he met me there on foot.
“Okay, as you know these pumps have
to be manually authorized from inside, event when activated with a
credit card. I'm going to break us in and while I'm getting the fuel
tank down the road I need you to figure out how to authorize the
pumps,” said Brandon.
I nodded and stood back as he swung a
crowbar into the glass door, surprisingly no alarms sounded, he
reached in and unlocked the door. I jumped the counter and began
looking at the machines and computer screen before me. I looked above
the counter headway and saw a key, one that I figured went into the
pump machine. As I put my hand on the counter top to pull myself up,
I felt paper brush my fingers. I quickly knelt down and shined my
phone light under the counter. BINGO! Directions on authorizing the
pumps manually were written on paper and taped under the counter,
which I'm sure were meant for new employees, not thieves.
I heard footsteps across the broken
glass and peaked up to see it was Brandon, “Here take this” he
said as he set a 1911 .40 on the counter. This made my heart race
even though I knew there wasn't much need to worry. I nodded and
cocked back the gun and stuck it in the back band of my jeans. I saw
that Brandon was carrying a pistol himself, as he half-turned and
said,” I'll be back, don't worry.”
I stood and watched him cut the other
chain and pull out of the gas station. When I couldn't see him any
farther I busied myself again, this time following the instructions
under the counter until all the pump lights were illuminating green.
I ran outside and fueled up my truck and the two gas cans I found in
the back. I also grabbed a few of the unused shopping bags and went
inside the gas station and began filling them with all the bottles of
water, juice and various food items and things like batteries, I even
grabbed a dozen or so cigarette packs for Brandon. I knew that if
this situation really got difficult, he'd eventually have to quit but
it'd be best if he did it slowly during such a stressful time.
It felt like forever that Brandon had
been gone, I tried sending a text message, “U okay?” but it
wouldn't go through despite having full service.
Minutes after loading the bags into my
truck, I saw Brandon coming down the road. I ran back inside the gas
station and reauthorized a pump. He had a large farm fuel tank on the
back of the trailer. My question of “how in the world did he get
that on there” was answered as I saw the come-along still wenched
to the front of the trailer. I went back outside and met Brandon with
a hug and kiss.
“I'm glad you came back, any longer
and I would've began to worry. Cell service is sketchy. I couldn't
get a text to go through.”
“I know I tried texting to see if you
were still alright.”
“Me too.”
“Let's get this baby filled up.”
I grabbed the nozzle from pump four as
Brandon climbed atop the trailer and the tank and unscrewed the lid.
I handed him the nozzle and we watched as it slowly began to fill up.
“What about if I authorize pump three
and we use two at the same time.”
“Good idea honey, check to see if it
will reach.”
I grabbed the nozzle from pump three
and handed it to Brandon, in which it did in fact reach to the tank
hole. I ran inside the gas station, jumping back over the counter and
authorized pump three. I gave him the thumbs up and checked the
computer as pump three's count-up began. I stopped for a moment and
stared at the register. It was shut but it had a key hole for a
manual unlock. I felt terrible for thinking what I was thinking, and
I knew we had plenty off money to get by on, but if certain things
like internet and phone lines go down what good are ATM cards?
I looked through the counter window at
the ATM, it wasn't lit up green like normal. What if the internet in
places was already down, I knew it was on the east coast.
I looked at the door behind the
counter. It was a heavy door with a silver deadbolt holding it shut.
I tried the handle but it was locked. Without really thinking and
losing all sense of morality I began running my fingers along every
ledge, looking for a key, there had to be a spare somewhere for the
manager. I opened the file cabinet but it was empty except for a few
blank employment applications. I pulled open the one drawer under the
counter.
“Ha!” I said aloud. This was a
small town and break-ins were unheard of. The large, heavy key was
laying there just waiting for someone to find it, for us to find it,
for thieves. My conscience rolled inside me but I fought back down
what I was feeling.
“Better us than someone else” I
reasoned with myself out loud. I pushed the key into the lock and
turned it with a satisfying “clank”. I turned the door handle and
pushed open the door. The room was small with another door leading
outside with EXIT written above it. There was a card table with
chairs, a microwave and some cleaning supplies on the shelf, but what
I was after was the safe set into the far wall of the room. It had a
keyed entry and a keypad, I knew from mine at home that either would
work, both were not required to open it.
I rushed back through to the counter
and shined my phone light back underneath the counter where I found
0601 scratched into the wood. I ran back to the safe and dialed in
0601 ENTER. The safe made a beep as the light turned green and with a
click, it popped open. Inside were a couple stacks of cash and two
different keys. I grabbed it all, shoving the cash in a trash bag I
grabbed from the supply shelf. Shutting the big door behind me I
tried first one key on the register with no success. I then tried the
second key and it turned with ease as I pulled open the register
drawer.
Inside wasn't much a couple hundreds,
twenties,tens, fives and ones. No coins were inside except for 3
pennies. I grabbed the cash and added it to my stash in the bag. As I
turned to crawl back over the counter, I remembered something from
watching cashiers at the store. I lifted up the cash drawer, no money
was under it but there was a small gold key. Not knowing what else it
could possibly belong to, I took it anyways.
I climbed over the counter and walked
to the ATM, I tried the first silver key that didn't work on the
register. I heard something click, but nothing opened. I pulled on
the front of the ATM where the keyhole was and it popped off. Inside
was two large stacks of twenty and ten dollar bills. I pushed on the
latch and the black plastic grid cover popped open. I emptied the
money into my trash bag. M conscience complained at me but I kept
ignoring it.
I grabbed some newspapers off the rack
beside the ATM and shoved them into the trash bag. If we ran into
trouble they'd assume at a glance it was an actual bag of trash.
Enjoying my own creativity I grabbed a soda from one of the coolers,
chugged it and tossed it in the trash bag. I grabbed a Three
Musketeers bar and opened it as I strolled to the back of the gas
station towards the restrooms. Its crazy how easy it was to throw
away one's humanity. But I had done it, more so than Brandon putting
a couple hundred dollars worth of fuel into a tank, I had actually
adopted a mindset of a criminal as I had let myself into anything I
could find in the gas station. I'm sure if it was this easy for me,
it was even easier for actual criminals.
I walked into the ladies restroom. I
took all the keys out of my front pocket and put them in the toilet
tank. I kept the gold key and put the toilet tank lid back on. I
half-laughed at myself, why on earth did I put the keys in the tank?
Was I reaching a new form of crazy. No, simply put, it was a way to
cope with my conscience, one I cannot explain. I used the restroom
and even washed my hands. We weren't that hard spent yet, I could
still enjoy running water and clean hands couldn't I?
I left the restroom and noticed at the
far end of the hallway was a large first aid kit. It had a key hole
with a lock that kept it anchored to the wall. I smiled. I fished out
the gold key from my pocket and reached on my tiptoes as I unlocked
the kit from the wall. I put the kit into my trash bag.
Making my way out of the gas station I
stopped at the coolers, grabbed a bottle of water, opened it and put
the gold key inside. I put the lid of the water back on and put the
water back inside the front of the cooler.
Weaving around the various isles to
exit the place I noticed Brandon wasn't on top of the fuel tank
anymore. He must have finally filled it up. As soon as I went to step
carefully through the broken glass, I noticed a beat up truck parked
outside.
Panic welled inside me. That wasn't
there before and it wasn't one I recognized from around town. I crept
through the glass and shifted the trash bag to my left hand as I
grabbed the pistol from my pants with my right. I inched up beside my
truck as I heard a voice.
“Give me the keys man, I don't want
to hurt you or your girl inside, I just want what you have.”
“You're not going to hurt anyone,
fill up your truck and leave.”
“No, I'm taking yours, look I don't
want to shoot you man.”
My heart was pounding in my ears. I
quietly slid the trash under my truck behind the wheel and put both
hands on my pistol. I peeked around the right side of my truck and
saw nothing. The wind had picked up and it had become hard to hear
what the man was saying. I looked over to the truck and saw that
there was no one else with him. I moved back to the middle and laid
down flat to look under neath. There were two sets of feet, one pair
was Brandon's in his boots, the other were dirty khakis with
blackened white tennis shoes.
While I couldn't distinguish the words
of their conversation I could tell the man in the khakis was becoming
more aggressive by the moment as he raised his voice with each
threat. I crept around the left hand side of the front of my truck.
Brandon was facing me, I knew he saw me pop up, but he never showed
it in his eyes.
“I'll kill her first! Give me the
damn keys!” I felt my heart throb in my ears again, I wasn't sure
if he had seen me or heard me.
“She has the keys, she's using the
bathroom inside.”
“Oh yea, well what's taking her so
long then?”
“She's nine months pregnant.”
Brandon was lying for obvious reasons but I wasn't sure of his
intent.
“Well then lets go pay her a visit.”
I saw the man push the gun to Brandon's neck to walk him past my
truck. I quietly scuttled back and underneath my truck on my belly. I
scooted to the right as they walked past. I scooted out on the other
side of my truck where they had been standing. I stood up and peeked
over the hood as I watched them walk towards the gas station. I
noticed the man was rough and looked like he had been working
cleaning chimneys. I also took note he had Brandon's pistol... That's
odd, now how on earth did he disarm him?
I didn't have time for questions
though, so I knelt down, took a deep breath and kicked myself in
gear. I stood up and took every single footstep with careful stride
as I neared behind them. If the man had any sense of his whereabouts
he would've noticed my reflection in the large glass windows of the
gas station. Brandon saw me and pointed his finger straight down. I
knew he was going to kneel or duck and then would be my chance.
I was a former fighter in MMA, small
town league never anything big, I was good, I left undefeated but it
had been a long time since I trained and I wasn't sure I had the
strength to contain the man, but if I could hold him long enough for
Brandon to assist me we'd be in business.
As they neared the door, the man said,”
Alright sweetheart, come on out, I've got your man here with a gun to
his head, I just want the truck keys.” In that moment I saw
Brandon's outstretched finger ball up into a fist and I knew it was
my time to strike.
Brandon ducked out of the man's hold as
I tackled him from behind putting him into a headlock, causing him to
drop his pistol. My strength failed me as I knew it would and despite
my arms locked around the man's head he turned the pistol back around
his face pointing it directly towards my face.
“There she is, that doesn't much feel
like a nine month belly on me-”
WHAM! Brandon punched the side of the
man's head making him squeeze the trigger. My pistol fired and I felt
my body falling, the world went black as I felt the concrete make
contact with the back of my head.
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