Wow everyone! This is great! I really
didn't expect such a simple request to catch on with my readers! This
crazy tale of a story has seemed to capture more attention than I
expected, with over 11,000 views and 6,000 shares across social
media! (Perhaps I should become more active on my Facebook page!) I
appreciate all of your reviews, a few of my favorites were:
“From part one you pulled me in and
sat me down, I anxiously awaited part two, now here I am awaiting
part three! I know the prompt said three parts, but please, please
don't stop there! This story is on my mind all day at work!” -
Casandra, Texas.
“I love the simple yet real life
introduction, the way you left me hanging on part two almost gave me
hurt feelings,” - Leston, Arkansas.
“Please tell me you aren't going to
stop this series after part three???? I think you could turn this
into a book!” - Margarette, California.
After such reviews, I'm really
considering turning this into a weekly episode, along with returning
to my usual blog content. But for now, without much further delay,
here is part three of three:
“Kayla! Kayla! Come on honey, wake
up! Please! Come on...” My head was fuzzy, but I fluttered my eyes
open to the sound of Brandon's voice. I felt something warm running
down my face, and the sun was much to bright.
“Brandon...” was all I could muster
up to say.
“I'm right here, you hit your head
pretty hard honey.”
Events just moments before flooded back
into my memory, I reached up and touched my face where I felt the
warm running sensation, I then looked at my blood soaked finger tips.
“Am I going to die?” I asked as my
heart began hammering in my ears.
“What?” Brandon hadn't realized
that I didn't quite know what was going on, I thought the man had
shot me.
I peered up at Brandon who seemed to be
sitting on the ground with my head in his lap. I turned my head
sideways and saw the lifeless body of the man in khakis laying feet
away, with his blood draining out of his head onto the concrete in
front of the gas station store. I stared at the man, contemplating
how that was almost me lying there. I was avoiding shock, but
definitely counting my lucky stars. I continued to stare at the man
as Brandon poured some water onto a cloth and cleaned my face off.
I laid with my head in Brandon's lap
for what seemed like forever. I closed my eyes and prayed to God real
hard thanking him and asking for him to keep Brandon and my family
safe. I startled out of my prayer when I felt a single drop of water
splash onto my eyelid. I felt Brandon wipe his thumb across my eyelid
and then I opened my eyes to see his own red and watery. I didn't say
anything I just stared back at him.
“Sorry honey, it's hot out here, you
just keep laying there until you feel like you can sit up,” him and
I both knew it wasn't sweat that fell from his eyes, but I dared not
take away his pride, I knew how I'd feel if it were the other way
around with me holding his head while he attempted to recover
temporarily from a hard knock after nearly being shot in the face.
“I might have a concussion.”
“I know, just lay here, we're fine,
I've got you, just lay here for a little bit.” I nodded my head as
I noticed the fuzziness was leaving my brain and the sunlight didn't
seem so bright anymore.
“How did he get your pistol?” I
asked after a long period of silence.
“I was on the tank and one of the
pumps reached its cut-off limit so I tossed it to the ground away
from the trailer, I felt my pistol move in my pants band but I felt
it was still there, I should've tucked it back down...” he gave a
long pause. “Then a wasp started swarming me and I started swatting
at it as its little wasp buddy appeared with it, eventually I felt my
pistol slide out and fall to the ground.”
“It didn't go off?” I couldn't
remember hearing a gun shot from within the gas station; however, the
wind was blowing pretty hard off and on all day.
“No, I didn't have one in the
chamber. That's why I ducked out of that guy's reach, I knew if he
pulled the trigger nothing would happen. I'm so sorry I couldn't
catch you, I didn't mean for his weight to fall back, I didn't know-”
“Brandon stop, I'm alive, I'm right
here you saved me from much worse, now tell me what happened.”
He nodded and began again,” Well I
kept fueling the tank and the wind picked up really hard, I should've
been watching my surroundings because I didn't hear that truck pull
in. I got the tank as full as I could and when I tossed the nozzle
down to put the tank lid back on, I noticed my pistol wasn't on the
ground anymore. I knew if it was you, you would've said something as
you walked up, but as soon as I looked past the driveway and saw the
truck parked a voice from the other side of the tank said 'Hey buddy,
looking for this?' he had it pointed directly at me. I realized he
didn't know it wasn't loaded, I was just going to try and talk him
down and overpower him when I got the chance; however, when I saw you
sneaking out of the station with that bag of yours I thought it'd be
easier to lure him towards the gas station where I wasn't cornered
against the truck.”
“Oh...” That was all I could say,
this early in a nationwide disaster and already humanity was going to
shit, myself included.
“What is in the bag by the way?”
I felt guilt rise in my emotions but I
fought it back and casually said, “Money.”
“Oh, good thinking. I don't know if
ATMs are working or not.”
“The one inside isn't so I cleaned it
out.”
Brandon chuckled and continued stroking
my face. I didn't think he was disappointed in me, but I couldn't say
for sure.
“I think I'm ready to try and sit
up.”
“Take it slow.” I strained to sit
up as Brandon supported my back and braced me. The world seemed to
spin for a moment but everything settled back into normal and my
vision became clear.
“Help me up.” Brandon looked at me
with questioning eyes but jumped to attention when he realized my
determination to stand. With a hand, he pulled me swiftly onto my
feet. My head instantly felt woozy, so I stepped into Brandon and
laid my face on his chest until the feeling went away.
Finally I stepped back at arms length,
with Brandon refusing to let me go.
“I think I can walk now.”
“I don't know.”
“We can't stay here much longer, more
people like that are going to flood in, highways and interstates may
be closed but there is no way police can cover all the back roads out
of the city.”
Brandon half opened his mouth to
protest but closed it when I began stepping without him. He trailed
me closely as knelt next to my truck and grabbed the trash bag from
behind the tire. I shook it and smiled at him. He opened the back
door of my truck and I tossed in the bag.
“I'm afraid of you getting dizzy
while you drive.”
“I'll pull over, I don't think
cellphones are working 100 percent at this point but I'll flash my
lights at you if I have to pull over.”
“You know the route to the Ozarks
better than I do, because you've actually driven it. How about you
lead and I'll follow.”
“Okay.” I turned for one last hug
and kiss before climbing into my truck. Brandon turned on heel but
turned back quickly and stepped up on my truck and kissed my deeply
through my open window and said, “I thought I almost lost you.”
He then walked swiftly to his truck climbed inside, started the
engine, rolled down his window and gave me the thumbs up.
I put my truck in drive and pulled out
of the gas station and made my way down the frontage road where I
made the marked turn on my map onto a back road. I watched my
surroundings intently, I peered at Brandon in his truck every few
seconds in my rearview mirror. Not too far into our country route I
saw some tractors and trucks all gathered in a field as what looked
like a farmer and his hired hands standing in a circle looking at
their phones. News about the collapse of our nation was spreading. I
watched for as long as I could the smoke and destruction of
Springfield disappear out of sight as we made our country trek
through central Illinois.
(While part three was not as long as the previous two parts, I wanted to stall on this post and take a general poll of my reviewers. Anyone that leaves a review please mention if you would like for me to continue this story and if so a suggested title. Thanks everyone for your support and as always thanks for reading Straight Southern!)
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